Eddyisnthere's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clownbreaker]

Clown time

jouste responds:

you bet! IT'S CLOWN TIME!

*clown highfives

[Birdblast]

Hes got a bird house in his soul

jouste responds:

I LOVE They Might Be Giants. haha man I should throw them on again. thanks for the call back!

*highfives

[Penny]

She’s so cute!!! (And powerful!)

jouste responds:

sure is! thanks a bunch for the kind words and score! <3

*highfives

[Action Vanny!]

Shes super cute and the colors are really nice; However, her posing makes her look like shes about to fall over and her back foot looks a bit off.

I'm not sure if you're going for a more action like pose or just having her standing. If you're going for a more action like one exaggerating on the curve of action could help a bit, moving her right leg in more and maybe lifting her left upwards to represent lunging. you could also have her turning her torso in the direction of her head to show more movement.

otherwise her proportions are pretty good from what I can tell and the shading is really cool!

Convert2Double responds:

Thank you! It's just that I'm still practicing 'leaning poses', even though some might say figures would fall if taken from real life perspective. I agree with your advice and even more so I agree with what you said regarding the first sentence

[Sunset]

This is really good! The spacing is well done. But the farthest grass field looks a bit bare and more like a wall than an expanse of land, you could probably break it up a little bit and a bit by adding a grouping of trees or rocks around the edges to give it more focus

other wise the the colors are really good and main bottom view is really well done!

These are a super helpful tutorials on doing top down views of forests (the first one was the wrong link sorry about that)
https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers/art/How-to-THINK-when-you-draw-FORESTS-QUICK-TIP-838188076
https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers/art/How-to-THINK-when-you-draw-FORESTS-QUICK-TIP-822167590
https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers/art/How-to-THINK-when-you-draw-FORESTS-QUICK-TIP-816251961

Ru2Kanga responds:

Thank you for your critique, I’ll surely keep it in mind!

[Imp]

This is so good! I love the body shape you used for her and her little gremlin hands. the colors also look absolutely gorgeous!

potachi responds:

Thanks so much! I’m glad you appreciate the goblin aesthetic 👌